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The Kingdom by the Sea : Part 1 | 4 comments (4 topical, 0 hidden)
Impressive. (none / 0) (#2)
by NerdGirl on Thu Dec 25, 2003 at 02:02:49 PM GMT

Once again, I love your writing style and the nonchalant way you introduce the reader to another universe.  I'm curious to see where the story goes from here.  

There are a few spelling (exquisite, not exquist), comma, hyphenation, and capitalization issues in there...  nothing which significantly distracts from the story, though.  

Good job and Merry Christmas.
~NG

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The Kingdom by the Sea : Part 1 | 4 comments (4 topical, 0 hidden)
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